Music (Showing 1 - 25 of 27 comments)


  • LyricalSlick
    posted by LyricalSlick
     

    My Own Lyrics/My Hurting Heart

    My Hurting Heart

    vs1: Whenever I see your face it hurts.
    Whenever I hear your voice it hurts.
    Whenever I think of you it hurts.
    It hurts, I guess my hearts not over you.

    vs2: I thought I was done thinking of you.
    I thought I was done caring for you.
    I thought I was done wanting you back.
    But I guess I'm not, my hearts not over you.

    chorus: Why oh why do I love you so much.
    Why oh why do I care.
    Why oh why do I long for your touch.
    It's not fair, no it's not fair.

    vs3: I wish I could tell my heart to stop caring for you.
    I wish I could tell my heart to find someone else.
    I wish I could tell my heart to find something else to do.
    But I can't it just longs for you.

    bridge: This is what you get when a heart's in pain.
    The hurt is so servere, it'll drive you insane.

    (chorus)

    Tell me what ya think!

    Copyright © 2007 Zachary Green All Rights Reserved
    posted 487 days ago
  • AliKatz
    posted by AliKatz
     
    I like it!
    There is a couple of lines where the metre is slight off, but I reckon it's really nice. ^_^
    posted 487 days ago
  • LyricalSlick
    posted by LyricalSlick
     
    yeah I wasnt even thinking bout that whe I wrote this, it kinda fell out of me.
    posted 487 days ago
  • 23averagerocker23
    posted by 23averagerocker23
     
    Hmmmm...pretty good. I can't decide if this or "What happened" is better...Your damn right you better send a cd down here! lol.
    posted 486 days ago
  • DemonSk8er
    posted by DemonSk8er
     
    Cool!

    ^_^
    posted 486 days ago
  • jane18tiff
    posted by jane18tiff
     
    omgooosh...its awesome...i understand you...kool
    posted 483 days ago
  • xxXSuzylovesyaXxx
    posted by xxXSuzylovesyaXxx
     
    that was really cool! i like it alot!!
    posted 482 days ago
  • TheEmoLoveChild6
    posted by TheEmoLoveChild6
     
    ..WOW...
    ..i SSOOOO feel the same..
    i used to have a crush on this one guy...who after i told everyone (cuz i thought so too) i didnt like him anymore, got a gf.. and now i regret it... cuz now im always wondering if we could have been..

    i understand... :(
    posted 473 days ago
  • TheEmoLoveChild6
    posted by TheEmoLoveChild6
     
    i have a new inspiration now.. your so deep...

    how do you write lyrics so good?? im trying myself.. i still cant get it right...

    my point (in my lyrics) are extremely similar to yours, but yours is extremely better than mine..
    do you just search deep down?? and your heart tells you what to write???
    posted 473 days ago
  • munkeyfreak
    posted by munkeyfreak
     
    it's extremely true, and extremely good
    posted 472 days ago
  • AxSlicexOfxEmo
    posted by AxSlicexOfxEmo
     
    <333 Your songs are awesome!! I wish I could write that well. T_T
    posted 466 days ago
  • XxScreamMyNamexX
    posted by XxScreamMyNamexX
     
    It actually sounds really good!
    Great job. <x3><x3/></x3>
    posted 466 days ago
  • fella505
    posted by fella505
     
    thats a damn good one. Still why do people hang on things that have a bitter sweet taste in life?
    posted 458 days ago
  • bonner3355
    posted by bonner3355
     
    You need to make a CD, you could be the next sansation like rolling stones or something like that. Don't ever, EVER stop writting.
    posted 435 days ago
  • 742gracie
    posted by 742gracie
     
    i like it alot. you are really good.
    posted 430 days ago
  • crazygracie13
    posted by crazygracie13
     
    you are way good at writing.
    posted 408 days ago
  • Irina17
    posted by Irina17
     
    These lyrics are wicked and your a good writer =)
    posted 359 days ago
  • xxXanaduxx
    posted by xxXanaduxx
     
    I like it it flows really well and it also all people can realt to it
    posted 358 days ago
  • darkvampirelady
    posted by darkvampirelady
     
    i love it
    posted 322 days ago
  • HotPiss
    posted by HotPiss
     
    please try harder, i just found that really shallow and boring.
    posted 321 days ago
  • LyricalSlick
    posted by LyricalSlick
     
    I agree with you this one wasnt as great
    posted 320 days ago
  • josieandthepusseycat
     
    omg that one reminds me of the first time i got my heart broken. i was really good. I love the way you described how it feels to have a broken heart. it describes it to the key.
    posted 289 days ago
  • FireAndLightning
    posted by FireAndLightning
     
    A bit short perhaps, but I still like it.
    posted 289 days ago
  • kittypoo68
    posted by kittypoo68
     
    I really like this one
    posted 260 days ago
  • mdmcwannabe
    posted by mdmcwannabe
     
    This one makes me wanna cry...like The Notebook cry sitting on a couch with a box of kleenex but I love how you can do that. Change my mood and thoughts completely to what you write!
    posted 175 days ago
  • soccerchiki62
    posted by soccerchiki62
     
    This song is the way i feel about one of my ex boyfriends
    posted 126 days ago