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  • angelr2004
    posted by angelr2004
     

    Poems

    I am a poem writer and I love to write poems so please post poems of your choice I would love to see some of what u all got. Heres one of mine!

    Titled Broken


    I am badly broken
    and he doesn't even know it
    Hes hurting me again
    can't you see he shows it

    I don't want another broken heart
    but thats whats going down
    He says he loves me
    but I don't see how

    The thought of loosing him
    scares me to death
    I want happiness with him
    and he wants someone else

    I guess I will never know true love
    my heart is torn apart
    I want to find the one again
    and mend back my heart

    Broken Angel with sadness
    who has lost her spirit
    She must get back her wings
    and fly to Heaven

    posted 424 days ago
  • CloudIsAMonkey
    posted by CloudIsAMonkey
     
    This is for my future garage band.

    Copyright. >_>"


    Oh, I knew a boy named Clyde
    He looks a lot like you
    give or take a foot or two

    He always liked to eat peanuts
    with the outer shell still intact
    If I'd have known what would happen
    I'd never have actually let it happen, a fact

    Chorus--I remember the day that he died
    drowned his sorrows in Downy and Tide
    I grew this beard to remember him by
    It's wet from the tears that I cried

    I never asked for this to start with
    so why did this happen to me?
    no i don't remember asking for this...
    but I'm sorry for all that I ruined
    My sharp words made your manservant leave


    When did I ask you for this?

    -And then the chorus again and some mixing-

    I never asked you for this.

    Bastard.



    Oh and yes it's SUPPOSED to suck. XD
    posted 424 days ago
  • Horrorbuff
    posted by Horrorbuff
     
    Outside the carolers start to sing
    I can't describe the joy they bring
    Cause joy is something they don't bring me

    My girlfriend is by my side
    From the roof are hanging sickles of ice
    Their whiny voices get irritating
    It's Christmas time again

    So I stand with a dead smile on my face
    Wondering how much of my time they'll waste
    Oh God I hate these Satan's helpers

    And then I guess I must have snapped
    Because I grabbed a baseball bat
    And made them all run for shelter

    It's Christmas time again
    It's time to be nice to the people you can't stand all year
    I'm growing tired of all this Christmas cheer
    You people scare me
    Please stay away from my home
    If you don't wanna get beat down
    Just leave the presents and then leave me alone.

    Well I guess it's not cool to freak on Christmas Eve
    Cause the cops came and arrested me
    They had an unfair advantage

    And even though the jail didn't have a tree
    Christmas came a night early
    Causes a guy named Bubba unwrapped my package (hot damn)

    It's Christmas time again
    It's time to be nice to the people you can't stand all year
    I'm growing tired of all this Christmas cheer
    You people scare me
    Please stay away from my home
    If you don't wanna get beat down
    Just leave the presents and then leave me alone

    I won't be home
    I won't be home for Christmas
    I won't be home
    I won't be home for Christmas (please post my bail)
    I won't be home
    I won't be home for Christmas (please post my bail)
    I won't be home
    >_>
    posted 424 days ago
  • CloudIsAMonkey
    posted by CloudIsAMonkey
     
    That's amazing. XD
    posted 424 days ago
  • DarkSun555
    posted by DarkSun555
     
    I'll throw one together. Give me an hour or so.
    posted 424 days ago
  • CloudIsAMonkey
    posted by CloudIsAMonkey
     
    You've got 48 minutes.

    Take it or leave it.
    posted 424 days ago
  • DarkSun555
    posted by DarkSun555
     
    A Face in Mist.

    What’s left of me now?
    I saw a door open wide
    My mind said run
    But my heart had died
    In this twisted room of fate
    There was a door
    And I was late.

    I made a choice
    With tear stained eyes
    I could join the world
    Or run and hide.

    Years from then
    In times of new
    Morose and morbid
    Was a face lost in mist
    Yet no one knew.
    posted 424 days ago
  • DarkSun555
    posted by DarkSun555
     
    I'll take it.

    Just got it done.

    I could edit it a bit more, but meh.
    posted 424 days ago
  • MISLISHIOUS
    posted by MISLISHIOUS
     
    I have a poetry site if anyone wants to check it out http://www.bebo.com/EmotionalSide
    posted 424 days ago
  • DarkSun555
    posted by DarkSun555
     
    *Pays for Horror's bail.*
    posted 424 days ago
  • someguywithapineapple
     
    He only had 2 weeks in Jail. >_>
    posted 424 days ago
  • DarkSun555
    posted by DarkSun555
     
    Oh well, he's out now.
    posted 423 days ago
  • Imaginary256
    posted by Imaginary256
     
    the monotonous screaming of wind
    silence
    the sun arises with hate
    each day we bury
    in silence
    the funeral of our lives
    each day sublimes
    into silence
    while the frozen whispers of morning
    caress black robes and torches
    pale hands clutching roses
    petals fade to grey
    time creeps to a trickle
    just one bloody drop
    a day
    the make-believe procession
    before they're cast away

    we are but memories
    soonest we wither away

    ---
    needs editing...'m just too lazy to do it :P
    posted 423 days ago
  • 1of2inamillion
    posted by 1of2inamillion
     
    My poems are on my website www.freewebs.com/meegz I have heaps more to add to it though.
    posted 423 days ago
  • Blizzard318
    posted by Blizzard318
     
    err....there is no good or bad poem so I'll post it anyways


    Jack and Jill went up the hill
    to fetch a pail of water
    no one knows what they did
    they came down with a daughter


    how u like it?
    posted 423 days ago
  • angelr2004
    posted by angelr2004
     
    The poems are really good guys! Thanks for writing some down! Keep them coming! TTYL *HUGS* ANGEL
    posted 423 days ago
  • dv8ntnt
    posted by dv8ntnt
     
    Amnesia's Pendulum

    so far from eternity, too close to home. To love is to live but, what do I to give?

    From beginning to end and back again. Is it our will that bends, every time the old wound mends?

    When all is ash and the embers fade, reminiscent of the memories we've made. Joy and pain are one an the same when fighting to stay sane. Nightmares and dreams are are but quite screams.

    Inside and out, riddled with doubt, scaring the heart burning red hot... Forget-me-not.
    posted 423 days ago
  • Kikuya
    posted by Kikuya
     
    i like that dv8.
    posted 423 days ago
  • dv8ntnt
    posted by dv8ntnt
     
    Thanx nice lady!

    I'm off to get some band aids. I think I broke something.
    posted 423 days ago
  • angelr2004
    posted by angelr2004
     
    New Poem From me

    The Child in Me

    The child in me woke up
    Shes cried so many tears
    Her world turned upside down
    He gave her so many fears

    She was lost for a long time
    She wasn't talking
    She was hiding from fear
    She went walking

    Her temper became clear
    She was crying our to me
    Shes gone crazy
    Why can't he just let her be

    She didn't ask for this
    What does he want from her
    Does he not see whats happening
    Every things a total blur

    All she needs is comfort
    Someone to show her the way
    She knows its not her fault
    She will get through this someday

    For now she must sleep
    She prays the lord her soul to keep
    Shes finally gone now
    Its my time to weep

    The child in me has vanished
    I can rest easier now
    She will return someday
    With love around her I hope somehow
    posted 396 days ago
  • scaryshib10
    posted by scaryshib10
     
    i wrote this poem, just cos... Pg.1


    The days become blacker, darker, shadows from overhead,
    Casting eerie shapes upon the ground in which she stands,
    Tears dripping, dripping, falling from pale blue eyes,
    Down to the deepest pools of red in which she stands.

    Standing there half naked, shivering sweating,
    Believing she’s unable to run, unable to hide, unable to hide,
    All this time spent building it up, and not telling any one,
    Unable to contain the anger welling inside.

    She unleashes two almighty blows
    This was it, the final straw
    Her fragile frame rocking in the wind
    She let out an ear piercing call

    The glint of an object falling from her hand
    Landing with a clatter on the floor
    Covered with the deep red of her arms
    She slowly makes her way to the floor
    posted 395 days ago
  • scaryshib10
    posted by scaryshib10
     
    the rest of the poem... Pg.2

    The room begins to swirl, creating a whirlpool of blur
    She feels cold and empty, as she continues to fall
    Falling, crumbling, curling into nothing
    Yet beyond the mist, there’s a familiar call

    Darkness overcomes her, and pulls her further away
    No more pain, no more suffering, from the life that she once had
    No more tormenting and gearing people
    Making her feel so sad

    Yet this voice continues to speak
    Telling her it will be alright, and that she’s there to help her
    And the mere warm touch of her hand
    Was just enough to keep her barely there

    Now she can hear sirens approaching
    They’re coming to get her, to keep her soul here on earth
    But she wants to let go, wants to be free
    Wants to finally feel the sweet taste of mirth

    The lights are flashing blue, red, blue, red
    This was it, the time for her everlasting sleep
    She took a final breath and whispered, ‘I’m sorry’
    Then all that was left was the sound of the machine – beep, beep, beeeeeeeeep
    posted 395 days ago
  • angelr2004
    posted by angelr2004
     
    That last poem was awesome! It was dark but I feel like this girl sometimes myself. I get depressed about a lot of things and think the same things that this poems puts out. Keep them coming!
    posted 394 days ago
  • snowgirl4525
    posted by snowgirl4525
     
    this is one of my poems that is getting published in a book called "Immortal Verses Series" and here is the poem


    To an Angel From my Heart
    Our love and care for you
    can not be explained
    we can't help but...
    morn and cry for your death.
    You changed our lives and many more
    you brought us joy and happiness
    even closer together
    but it was your time to go
    a time we all wish would have come later
    now all we have are memories.
    Memories which will be treasured for always.
    In our hearts lives an angel
    an angel named Melainegh Isabella Pedraza

    Angelica Marie Pedraza
    Copyright ©2007 Angelica Marie Pedraza



    posted 394 days ago
  • scaryshib10
    posted by scaryshib10
     
    thank you Angel! i love writing poetry... and this is an excellent place to share it with ppl such as yourself :)
    posted 392 days ago
  • MissLorna
    posted by MissLorna
     
    Am also into poetry...
    Let me know wat you think of this...'

    Heart in my arms

    I miss the feeling
    of your heart in my arms.
    I miss the way
    you would melt to my charms.

    I miss the knowing
    you were desperate for my touch.
    I miss the assurance
    that you loved me, and how much.

    I miss the adoration,
    that would sparkle in your eye.
    I miss feeling loved,
    so much, I would cry.

    I miss that feeling,
    you would love me forever.
    I miss how you dreamed
    that we could be together.

    I miss being certain,
    that true love would prevail...
    And I miss you.
    And I love you.
    As I have, without fail.

    Lorna.
    posted 392 days ago